Wednesday, January 21, 2009

What if?

The Inaugural Poem was hard for me to listen to. It was a bit too, ummm, prose-y. Sounded like a speech or a creative story. But I had said that I would find the text and read it because I had read a post by Anxious Black Woman about the poet Elizabeth Alexander as a poet to watch. I searched for and found the text of the poem and I think the problem was just the delivery because it was a beautiful, just beautiful (actual) poem:

Praise song for the day.

Each day we go about our business, walking past each other, catching each others' eyes or not, about to speak or speaking. All about us is noise. All about us is noise and bramble, thorn and din, each one of our ancestors on our tongues. Someone is stitching up a hem, darning a hole in a uniform, patching a tire, repairing the things in need of repair.

Someone is trying to make music somewhere with a pair of wooden spoons on an oil drum with cello, boom box, harmonica, voice.

A woman and her son wait for the bus.

A farmer considers the changing sky; A teacher says, "Take out your pencils. Begin."

We encounter each other in words, words spiny or smooth, whispered or declaimed; words to consider, reconsider.

We cross dirt roads and highways that mark the will of someone and then others who said, "I need to see what's on the other side; I know there's something better down the road."

We need to find a place where we are safe; We walk into that which we cannot yet see.

Say it plain, that many have died for this day. Sing the names of the dead who brought us here, who laid the train tracks, raised the bridges, picked the cotton and the lettuce, built brick by brick the glittering edifices they would then keep clean and work inside of.

Praise song for struggle; praise song for the day. Praise song for every hand-lettered sign; The figuring it out at kitchen tables.

Some live by "Love thy neighbor as thy self."

Others by first do no harm, or take no more than you need.

What if the mightiest word is love, love beyond marital, filial, national. Love that casts a widening pool of light. Love with no need to preempt grievance.

In today's sharp sparkle, this winter air, anything can be made, any sentence begun.

On the brink, on the brim, on the cusp -- praise song for walking forward in that light.

I absolutely love it.

What if the mightiest word is love, love beyond marital, filial, national. Love that casts a widening pool of light. Love with no need to preempt grievance.

What if??


80sBaby70sSoul said...

Oooooooh Chile...I HATED it (like the 2 gay dudes from In Living Color).

Chi-Chi, The Original Wombman said...

Hey Nya! It's not the best poem EVAH but those lines that I highlighted really are poignant, I think. That makes the whole poem to me.

Ashaki said...

her delivery was dull.i think if she had a livlier and more dramatic/creative delivery she coulda tricked us into thinking that poem was the bomb lol

Loren Gaffin said...

I did not like the poem. Give me Maya Angelou any day.

Chi-Chi, The Original Wombman said...

Loren, you're in good company. I haven't met a person yet who agrees with me!! :)

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